FIC: The Hawthorne Detention (Harry/Snape, NC-17, ~2500 words) (PPFF #4 of 8)

[amanuensis1]

Note the warnings on this one, guys. Though I admit I hope at least some people won't be scared by the warnings and will have a look anyway. I rather liked this foray into something I haven't really written before.


Title: The Hawthorne Detention
Author: Amanuensis
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Snape's lying about the nature of the detention. Not that it matters.
Kinks/Warnings: Non-con water sports. (No urophagia if you're worried.)
A/N: Written for Wave 3 of the pornish_pixies Fantasy Fest request made by jjtaylor -- "Snape forcing Harry to delay urinating (possibly using magic) and delighting in Harry's shame. Harry watching Snape touch hismelf, Snape then bringing Harry to orgasm before allowing him to use the toilet." I did ask JJ if it was all right to take this one beyond bladder-holding and she said okay, so, ya been warned.
Thanks to betas harvest_blue, silentauror, florahart, and fabularasa.

('Do you think,' said Snape, 'that I have all night?')

Comments

[rectpropagation.livejournal.com]

Watersports.

I have avoided fics involving watersports since I figured out what that meant (too young). But because it's you I read it and also because it's you it was great.

Not even a little bit arousing though; I couldn't stop thinking, "Jeez, there's going to be PEE!"

I decided not to look up urophagia until after I read the story (why freak myself out if it's not even in the story) and found this:

Since artificial sweeteners are excreted in urine, consuming artificial sweetener before urine play can lend a sweet taste to the urine. Drinking diet soda, or other beverages containing artificial sweetener, before urine play will have the dual effect of diluting the urine and sweetening it. However, if you taste sugar in you or your partner's urine and you or your partner have not consumed artificial sweetener, this may be a sign of diabetes and you should see a doctor.

Generally not a warning sign your doctor tells you about.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

I'm still not comfortable with the "whee, it's pee" (can't believe I just called it that) type of urophilia, but the idea of it as humilation or torture kink does work for me. So glad you read it despite your fears! And you taught me something about artificial sweetners I never knew and hope I don't have to encounter. ^_^