FIC: The Hawthorne Detention (Harry/Snape, NC-17, ~2500 words) (PPFF #4 of 8)

[amanuensis1]

Note the warnings on this one, guys. Though I admit I hope at least some people won't be scared by the warnings and will have a look anyway. I rather liked this foray into something I haven't really written before.


Title: The Hawthorne Detention
Author: Amanuensis
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Snape's lying about the nature of the detention. Not that it matters.
Kinks/Warnings: Non-con water sports. (No urophagia if you're worried.)
A/N: Written for Wave 3 of the pornish_pixies Fantasy Fest request made by jjtaylor -- "Snape forcing Harry to delay urinating (possibly using magic) and delighting in Harry's shame. Harry watching Snape touch hismelf, Snape then bringing Harry to orgasm before allowing him to use the toilet." I did ask JJ if it was all right to take this one beyond bladder-holding and she said okay, so, ya been warned.
Thanks to betas harvest_blue, silentauror, florahart, and fabularasa.

('Do you think,' said Snape, 'that I have all night?')

Comments

[isiscolo.livejournal.com]

For a moment I thought this was a review of one of Ludlum's thrillers.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

I haven't even read Ludlum! I wouldn't even be able to quote a title of his! ^_^

[isiscolo.livejournal.com]

The Bourne Identity, The Matarese Circle, The Holcroft Covenant - you can see why I might have been confused!

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*has giddy giggle fit*

[fools-trifle.livejournal.com]

Hi again :)
Still feeling a bit wibbly at leaving you comments about my drawing, but here goes: it's posted over at hp_fringeart (which means it's public), so if you're really happy about it you can link to it here (http://www.livejournal.com/community/hp_fringeart/168820.html#cutid1) - or not, as you please (I definitely won't feel slighted if you don't link).

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Whee, I'm so tickled that you posted it on a community! *dances*

[antou-san.livejournal.com]

..just when I was thinking this was my worst month ever, Amanuensis came out with 2 new fics *_* thank you, my dear!
This one was great too..you know how much I love detention and mind games *ç* poor brat-Harry..I understand him, it's horrible to delay urinating (I triend it when doing echography).
Evil Snape mmmmhhhh *__*

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

I know how much I love those games. Mmm! (and there will be one more fic)--it may or may not be your thing, justsoyaknow.

[fabularasa.livejournal.com]

Oh, I forgot to say how much the title makes me giggle. But now I see from your above exchange with Isis that you didn't aim for The Giggle. Well, you got it, anyway. It's got that whole Tom Clancy/Robert Ludlum thing going on that gives it just the right air of *dunh dunh dunh* Seriousness of Purpose. And that ends up being, of course, hee-larious.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

It was meant to be all stark and funny in its starkness--you got it exactly. "Shit, I hear there's this thing Snape calls The Hawthorne Detention." "Is it bad?" "How the bleep should I know? It SOUNDS awful but it could mean you chop hawthorne for an hour and leave!" "If that was all it was, why would they refer to it in capitals with 'The' at the beginning?" "SHUT UP AND GO AWAY."

[rectpropagation.livejournal.com]

Watersports.

I have avoided fics involving watersports since I figured out what that meant (too young). But because it's you I read it and also because it's you it was great.

Not even a little bit arousing though; I couldn't stop thinking, "Jeez, there's going to be PEE!"

I decided not to look up urophagia until after I read the story (why freak myself out if it's not even in the story) and found this:

Since artificial sweeteners are excreted in urine, consuming artificial sweetener before urine play can lend a sweet taste to the urine. Drinking diet soda, or other beverages containing artificial sweetener, before urine play will have the dual effect of diluting the urine and sweetening it. However, if you taste sugar in you or your partner's urine and you or your partner have not consumed artificial sweetener, this may be a sign of diabetes and you should see a doctor.

Generally not a warning sign your doctor tells you about.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

I'm still not comfortable with the "whee, it's pee" (can't believe I just called it that) type of urophilia, but the idea of it as humilation or torture kink does work for me. So glad you read it despite your fears! And you taught me something about artificial sweetners I never knew and hope I don't have to encounter. ^_^