FIC: The Hawthorne Detention (Harry/Snape, NC-17, ~2500 words) (PPFF #4 of 8)

[amanuensis1]

Note the warnings on this one, guys. Though I admit I hope at least some people won't be scared by the warnings and will have a look anyway. I rather liked this foray into something I haven't really written before.


Title: The Hawthorne Detention
Author: Amanuensis
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Snape's lying about the nature of the detention. Not that it matters.
Kinks/Warnings: Non-con water sports. (No urophagia if you're worried.)
A/N: Written for Wave 3 of the pornish_pixies Fantasy Fest request made by jjtaylor -- "Snape forcing Harry to delay urinating (possibly using magic) and delighting in Harry's shame. Harry watching Snape touch hismelf, Snape then bringing Harry to orgasm before allowing him to use the toilet." I did ask JJ if it was all right to take this one beyond bladder-holding and she said okay, so, ya been warned.
Thanks to betas harvest_blue, silentauror, florahart, and fabularasa.

('Do you think,' said Snape, 'that I have all night?')

Comments

[fabularasa.livejournal.com]

Oh, I forgot to say how much the title makes me giggle. But now I see from your above exchange with Isis that you didn't aim for The Giggle. Well, you got it, anyway. It's got that whole Tom Clancy/Robert Ludlum thing going on that gives it just the right air of *dunh dunh dunh* Seriousness of Purpose. And that ends up being, of course, hee-larious.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

It was meant to be all stark and funny in its starkness--you got it exactly. "Shit, I hear there's this thing Snape calls The Hawthorne Detention." "Is it bad?" "How the bleep should I know? It SOUNDS awful but it could mean you chop hawthorne for an hour and leave!" "If that was all it was, why would they refer to it in capitals with 'The' at the beginning?" "SHUT UP AND GO AWAY."