FIC: "Hypocritic Oath" (Snape/Harry, NC-17) (#6 of the "Month of Smut" fics)

[amanuensis1]

Story #6 for the pornish_pixies Fantasy Fest. Dark, Snape/Harry non-con. Headers and link below.

Title: Hypocritic Oath
Pairing: Snape/Harry
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Harry's not well. Neither is Snape.
Kinks/Warnings: Non-con. Prostitution. Voyeurism by way of third-party OMC. Sloppy seconds.
A/N: For the Pornish Pixies Fantasy Fest request made by snapesdarkling-- "snarry. rentboy harry. sev drugs and keeps him in a hidden location. very dom sev." Thanks to betas shaggirl, florahart, and fabularasa.

(Hypocritic Oath)

Comments

[evieangelique.livejournal.com]

Bloody hell! *still dead* How many are left in this series? I don't think I will survive to see the end! :O :D

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Supposed to be fourteen. Of which eleven and a half are written. ^_^ I'm goin' for it!

[evieangelique.livejournal.com]

This is just so so great. And I've recently developed a penchant for dark!fic too. This coming from someone who was an exclusive H/D shipper just last year. Oh, how the mighty have fallen. *g*

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Yayyy! Don't get me wrong, I like H/D too--I just love watchin' people lose their exclusivity. ^_^

[evieangelique.livejournal.com]

I love the fact that I'm not squicked by much now :D Believe it or not I used to hate the idea of Snarry. :O It's a good thing I lost that exclusivity as I was missing out on a great chunk of fandom!

Plus, H/D is unfortunately being overrun by a lot of bad stuff. I weep for my first ship.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

it's all a sad, sad cycle, isn't it? *weeps with you*

[evieangelique.livejournal.com]

It's terrible. I feel almost bad that I deliberately stay away from H/D now unless it's been heavily recced or it's an author that I trust *cough*you*cough* :D :D There are so many cliches in the ship writing now that it make me want to hurl with pain.

Besides, if everyone loves the love/hate dynamic so much, why isn't there more Ron/Snape? /:)

[tocada.livejournal.com]

Would you mind if I friended you?

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Never need permission for it! My very great pleasure that you wish to!

[tocada.livejournal.com]

ty ^^

[loupgarou1750.livejournal.com]

*kneels*

*prostrates*

*drools*

*gouges eyes out*

I truly don't know if I'm more turned on or horrified. I feel as if I have a fever. Sick and hot and flushed and weak. I feel as if I were recovering from a fever. Sweaty and alive and pleased.

You are phenomenal, awe inspiring. I am not worthy.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Your "I don't know how to feel" reaction has me happy dancing. And blushing. *blushes* Thank you SO very much!!!

Hypocritic Oath

[ex-leianora730.livejournal.com]

oh! ouch! Yet again, I find myself barely able to think! "Where are we going?" "We're not, you're going to have a visitor." Oh my! Somehow, you manage to take the most innocent, seemingly harmless statements, conversations, and occurrences and make them into wonderfully dark, deliciously evil fics that I've ever had the fortune of reading. Harry's bewilderment is so painful that I was left wincing and wondering when the physical pain was going to start within me. Snape is so evil, and I think the creepiest aspect of his evilness is his matter-of-factness throughout the entire piece. His cruelty cuts with the precision of a skilled sergion, each cut so delicately made, and not too painful at first, but then so utterly devastating when the knife is pulled free and we get to see his evil for what it truly is. Wonderfully done!

Re: Hypocritic Oath

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow! Thank you so much--you make me feel it worked on every single level! I'm overwhelmed. Thank you thank you!!!

[sodomite.livejournal.com]

amazing. i have no words. it was absolutely beautiful.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*pets you* You total dear! Thank you!

[soawen.livejournal.com]

What a delightful twist on Groundhogs Day! I can't tell you how much I love the concept of Harry being a clean slate on which to write 'abuse' in big, red letters every. single. day.

Snape is really scary here - taking what he wants from fate because he's owed, dammit, and damn the rest of the world including, or most specifically, Harry Potter.

Your summary made me giggle after I had read the fic - a little understated, isn't it? ;P

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Harry being a clean slate on which to write 'abuse' in big, red letters every. single. day.

mooooooaaaaaaan. Love you so much!

And yeah, I love understated summaries. ^_^

[darkrhiannon.livejournal.com]

Scary. You write tainted Snape so well and damaged Harry equally believably. There truly are no happy endings for those two, much as we might wish them.

-Rhi

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*looks around furtively* Don't tell the others, but that is the way I kinda see it, yeah! Of course, I'm impressed as hell by authors who can make me believe otherwise, but, there you have it. Thank you SO much for your lovely comments!

[julia-fractal.livejournal.com]

Oh God, that was just amazing! You wrote this scenario so well and so convincingly. My heart bled for Harry even as I was melting from the sex. And I loved how calculating and manipulative, yet insecure Snape was throughout the story.

Writing something like this is amazing, the fact that you wrote 14 stories like this in a month is unbelievable!

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

You sweetie! Thank you so very much for the feedback--and it was fun writing all of them, even if I'm EXHAUSTED now!