Drabble Night, July 16, 2004
Jul. 16th, 2004 09:50 pmThe theme for the night was the five (or six) senses. The drabbles had to include at least one of those. I did three drabbles, and they were all Harry-pairings, and the word count just exploded on me once I hit the second. But it felt worth it for the third one.
Harry/Remus, Cross that bridge when we come to it. (challenge by
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"Was that your stomach?"
Harry grinned, caressed the gurgling offender with a hand. "Guess it was. I haven't eaten all day."
Leaning over the side of the bed, Remus groped on the floor for his discarded cardigan. "Here." Chocolate was produced. "I recall you like this kind with the nuts."
Dark sweetness on the tongue, melting like no other flavor could. Harry savored every square.
"That's my last piece, it looks," said Remus.
"Giving away all your chocolate? So careless. That's not like you."
"Brat. I can fix that." Lips covered Harry's, and he willingly shared the taste of chocolate with Remus's equally hungry mouth.
When they separated to breathe, Harry teased, "What if a Dementor comes?"
"We'll cross that bridge when we come to it."
Even that small amount of chocolate was enough to sustain them for hours more.
And no, Dementors did not interrupt.
twins/Harry -- You can't have any (challenge by
cluegirl)
"George, stay outside!"
"The fuck?! I--" A muffled word in Latin, and the door flew outward, taking some of its framing with it. Coughing, George barrelled through the empty doorway.
To find he should have obeyed his twin.
"Oh, fuck."
Fred was sitting against the wall, as far from the still figure as he could go. "His eyes..." he murmured, his own hollow and staring. "His eyes...they were red. He'd come a bit early and I started to say that you weren't home yet, and he smiled as though that was a good thing, as though he thought it was only the two of us who trysted here--and I should have seen something was wrong, but then he came up and kissed me, and I thought he just wanted to get started without you, and that's when I saw the eyes, fuck, George, the eyes..."
George saw that the eyes were muddy dead green now, and lifeless as the rest of Harry.
"Possessed him," Fred croaked. "He tried to kill me, George. He was strangling me and I knew it wasn't him, it was V-Voldemort in him, and I was going to die and I grabbed the first thing I could find and it was just that old broken clock but it was heavy and oh fuck, George, I've k-killed him..."
George reached a hand towards the corpse.
"No!" Fred's head snapped around. "Don't touch anything! I'm not going to have anyone saying you were involved, goddammit! I killed him--I'll take the blame! Not you!"
George closed his eyes. "Never gonna happen, mate."
Fred stared for another moment.
And then allowed himself to collapse weeping in the arms of the one who had shared every moment of his life from the womb on, and would share this.
Snape/Harry, "It's never too late." (challenge by
venivincere)
Harry knew the taste of that mouth as it tried to send air back into his exhausted lungs.
Which is why, when the taste slipped away from him, he knew things had gone very badly indeed.
Couldn't smell that ozone sizzle of magic on the battlefield any longer. The overcast daylight was fading from his vision as if the sun had just remembered an appointment on the other side of the world. The hands gripping him, shaking him like a recalcitrant pup--those were soon lost to him, as well.
All he wanted was to lie down and rest. Rest for such a long time.
"NO, you pathetic excuse for a hero, you will not do this! I will not let you! Look at me, curse you! Look at me!"
How could he possibly get any rest with that shouting going on?
"You will not leave me! I need you, you idiot child!"
...What? Had Snape just...admitted something there?
The hands really were hurting him, and he tried to blink against the painful light. He could smell the grass crushed beneath him, and licked dry lips to speak, tasting the foulness of whatever it was Snape had poured into his mouth.
Snape's eyes were glittering.
"Th...thought it was too late," Harry muttered.
Snape sucked in breath slowly. "For Voldemort, yes, you bloody reckless paladin." And he pulled Harry into an embrace, clearly not caring who saw. "But he had no one to hold him here."
Harry/Remus, Cross that bridge when we come to it. (challenge by
"Was that your stomach?"
Harry grinned, caressed the gurgling offender with a hand. "Guess it was. I haven't eaten all day."
Leaning over the side of the bed, Remus groped on the floor for his discarded cardigan. "Here." Chocolate was produced. "I recall you like this kind with the nuts."
Dark sweetness on the tongue, melting like no other flavor could. Harry savored every square.
"That's my last piece, it looks," said Remus.
"Giving away all your chocolate? So careless. That's not like you."
"Brat. I can fix that." Lips covered Harry's, and he willingly shared the taste of chocolate with Remus's equally hungry mouth.
When they separated to breathe, Harry teased, "What if a Dementor comes?"
"We'll cross that bridge when we come to it."
Even that small amount of chocolate was enough to sustain them for hours more.
And no, Dementors did not interrupt.
twins/Harry -- You can't have any (challenge by
"George, stay outside!"
"The fuck?! I--" A muffled word in Latin, and the door flew outward, taking some of its framing with it. Coughing, George barrelled through the empty doorway.
To find he should have obeyed his twin.
"Oh, fuck."
Fred was sitting against the wall, as far from the still figure as he could go. "His eyes..." he murmured, his own hollow and staring. "His eyes...they were red. He'd come a bit early and I started to say that you weren't home yet, and he smiled as though that was a good thing, as though he thought it was only the two of us who trysted here--and I should have seen something was wrong, but then he came up and kissed me, and I thought he just wanted to get started without you, and that's when I saw the eyes, fuck, George, the eyes..."
George saw that the eyes were muddy dead green now, and lifeless as the rest of Harry.
"Possessed him," Fred croaked. "He tried to kill me, George. He was strangling me and I knew it wasn't him, it was V-Voldemort in him, and I was going to die and I grabbed the first thing I could find and it was just that old broken clock but it was heavy and oh fuck, George, I've k-killed him..."
George reached a hand towards the corpse.
"No!" Fred's head snapped around. "Don't touch anything! I'm not going to have anyone saying you were involved, goddammit! I killed him--I'll take the blame! Not you!"
George closed his eyes. "Never gonna happen, mate."
Fred stared for another moment.
And then allowed himself to collapse weeping in the arms of the one who had shared every moment of his life from the womb on, and would share this.
Snape/Harry, "It's never too late." (challenge by
Harry knew the taste of that mouth as it tried to send air back into his exhausted lungs.
Which is why, when the taste slipped away from him, he knew things had gone very badly indeed.
Couldn't smell that ozone sizzle of magic on the battlefield any longer. The overcast daylight was fading from his vision as if the sun had just remembered an appointment on the other side of the world. The hands gripping him, shaking him like a recalcitrant pup--those were soon lost to him, as well.
All he wanted was to lie down and rest. Rest for such a long time.
"NO, you pathetic excuse for a hero, you will not do this! I will not let you! Look at me, curse you! Look at me!"
How could he possibly get any rest with that shouting going on?
"You will not leave me! I need you, you idiot child!"
...What? Had Snape just...admitted something there?
The hands really were hurting him, and he tried to blink against the painful light. He could smell the grass crushed beneath him, and licked dry lips to speak, tasting the foulness of whatever it was Snape had poured into his mouth.
Snape's eyes were glittering.
"Th...thought it was too late," Harry muttered.
Snape sucked in breath slowly. "For Voldemort, yes, you bloody reckless paladin." And he pulled Harry into an embrace, clearly not caring who saw. "But he had no one to hold him here."
Goodness! First....
Date: 2004-07-16 07:15 pm (UTC)2. Lordie, that's dark. I... wow. I really have no idea what to say. Not in a bad way, just... intense and nasty. And, of course, very well done.
3. This, on the other hand, is lovely. Your Snape is excellent as usual, and the string of insults is perfect, along with the understatement of the last line.
Great stuff, dearheart!
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Sobriquet :)
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Date: 2004-07-16 08:04 pm (UTC)And I particularly love Snape's insults/endearments, in fanfic--one of the best reasons to write Snape.
Thank you so much!
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Date: 2004-07-16 07:16 pm (UTC)Twins/Harry = Lord if I don't love myself a Harry/Twins smut and with a glorious added twist. And the Twins! Always together to the end!! *adores*
Harry/Snape = probably one of the best drabbles I have ever read. Ever.
But he had no one to hold him here.
Oh oh oh! If that doesn't tug at the heartstrings!
*loves*
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Date: 2004-07-16 08:06 pm (UTC)Isn't it wonderful, how many people love the Harry/Twins? Like, it should be so wrong but everyone's always going "Awwww!" I love it.
You are way too kind--thank you so much for the lovely comments!
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Date: 2004-07-16 07:34 pm (UTC)And the Snarry is just lovely. My heart is all melty now. *happy sigh*
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Date: 2004-07-16 08:07 pm (UTC)Ooh, thank you so very much, dearest!
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Date: 2004-07-16 07:38 pm (UTC)*Loves on it some more!*
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Date: 2004-07-16 10:01 pm (UTC)"His eyes..." he murmured, his own hollow and staring.
So perfect!
(have you looked at the community hogwartsch? It is the cool, you need to go to hogwarts_ch first to be sorted.)
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Date: 2004-07-16 10:35 pm (UTC)Oh that was great, all three of them. The twins/Harry was [a good] depressing. The Snarry was touching. I'm not a fan of Harry/Remus, but that was cute. You should do more drabbles.
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Date: 2004-07-16 11:06 pm (UTC)I loved the Harry/Remus! Just very erotic, oral stimulation! Yum! Chocolate and being in bed! And I love the way that their pleasure can keep away Dementors!
Oh, poor Fred 'n'George! Theyaresogoingtojail!
An d the Snape/Harry was very affecting. Of course Severus is going to badger Harry from dying!
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Date: 2004-07-17 01:38 pm (UTC)Of course Severus is going to badger Harry from dying!-- Oh, there's the verb for it, yes!
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Date: 2004-07-17 12:53 am (UTC)As for the other fics: you really can make me actually like something else than my OTP :) You rock.
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Date: 2004-07-17 02:34 am (UTC)Hee. I love Remus and his chocolate obsession. Remus/Harry fluff is so adorably easy to read and I love things that I can just sit back and think, "Mm, that was fantastic." without being all confused.
#2 And then allowed himself to collapse weeping in the arms of the one who had shared every moment of his life from the womb on, and would share this.
*sobs* That... Wah. How could you do that? But, oh, poor Fred, he was so distraught and angsty twincest is it's best like this and that's not fair that you made Fred hurt so much. Poor Fred.
#3 Stop it. Stop. Stop doing that. Stop it. Really. You will make Snarry my OTP and that's not fair to my Drarry. But. Stop it. Stop. Argh. So good.
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Date: 2004-07-17 03:56 am (UTC)Regarding #2 and #3: *blink blink* *lip wobble*
(Because actions speak louder than words :P)
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Date: 2004-07-17 06:03 am (UTC)The Twins/Harry was so sad!
And the Snape/Harry...just fabulous. That last line! **melts**
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Date: 2004-07-17 05:41 pm (UTC)Normally I'd imagine that to be a Snape comment, but it sounds so good on Lupin. XD
I loved the twins drabble.. So sad.
They're always there for each other.
Snape Loves him with a Capital L!
I just adore slash drabbles/fics of Snarry on the final battlefield.
I just really, really do.
I adore you. This much: |---------------------------|
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Date: 2004-07-17 09:29 pm (UTC)Normally I'd imagine that to be a Snape comment, but it sounds so good on Lupin. XD
I know! "Brat" should be Snape's domain, but sometimes other characters kinda hone in there and need to use it, hee.
Thank you for all the comments! (and your icon is KILLING me. Whee!)
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Date: 2004-07-17 10:19 pm (UTC)Harry/Twins -- [wince] Loving devotion staggers into the area of sweetly creepy.
Snape/Harry -- Awwwww! :D You do the best Severus!
Angie
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Date: 2004-07-20 09:51 pm (UTC)Are Harry and Remus in AZKABAN in the first one? Because NO ONE ELSE seems to be mentioning this. Wah!
Anyway, lovely job, Amy, and you better be there Friday so I can see the new ones in person! :D
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Date: 2004-07-21 03:55 am (UTC)And I do anticipate being there Friday. You too? Yay!
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Date: 2004-07-25 11:54 am (UTC)Finally found it!!
Date: 2006-04-05 06:21 am (UTC)Now I'll never lose it again. :)
Re: Finally found it!!
Date: 2006-04-13 12:36 am (UTC)