Drabble Night, May 21, 2004
May. 21st, 2004 10:59 pmFour drabbles tonight. The theme was "Structures," as in houses or places or what have you.
Harry/Sirius, "The flavor of morning" (challenge by
sparrohawk)
Sirius has given Harry all the water in the pail, and his fever still won't break, and the scrap of cloth that was Sirius's shirt doesn't have enough dampness left in it to sponge anything. Not Harry's fevered face, not the wound in Harry's thigh with its now-sweetish smell, not the ugly red streaks starting to spread into his groin and torso.
He bangs on the cell bars for nearly an hour at a time, using the empty pail. Yelling. Pleading.
No one comes.
Five days later, a host of dead Death Eaters in his wake, Dumbledore finds them.
Sirius's presence, draped over the corpse, lips pressed to Harry's forehead, has kept the rats at bay.
Too blinded by tears to be sickened, Dumbledore brings Sirius out of the dungeon cell, and takes him to face the impossible, hateful morning.
Snape/Sirius -- Every force evolves a form. (challenge by
cluegirl)
"You cannot possibly sit down."
"Why not?" Sirius shrugged as he did exactly that, plopping himself down onto the floor of the dodecahedron. "Our wands aren't having any effect on the walls of this thing. Might as well get comfortable and wait for rescue."
"You cannot 'get comfortable' in this thing, Black! We've got a pentagonal space one-twelfth of the surface structure to stand upon in here. If you sit I can't--you'll be--"
"Touching you?" Sirius leered.
"Yes! A fucking pox on all Death Eaters who can count beyond three. A triangular pyramid trap would have accomplished the same thing and given us more standing room."
Sirius appeared to consider this. "But standing in a triangular pyramid, our heads would be awfully close together, wouldn't they?"
"You--! That's not what I--!"
Sirius snagged his robe and pulled him sprawling. "Shut up and give us a kiss."
Harry/Ron -- The beauty is that everything changes (challenge by
cluegirl)
"Your mum expects to see you under that, one day," said Harry in a quiet moment, looking at the gazebo.
"Yeah, well. 'Spect she thought I'd be under it before Ginny." Digging his hands deep into the pockets of his formal attendant's robes, Ron turned to look at his sister. He'd never seen a girl look more beautiful, in those white bridal robes of hers. From the way her groom's besotted smile never wavered, neither had Neville, apparently.
"Maybe--" Harry wasn't speaking loudly, but none of the guests were near--"Maybe another night we come out here. Just by ourselves. Your mum doesn't need to know."
Ron snorted. "For what? A private ceremony, or just a good al fresco shag?"
"Bit of both, maybe."
"You're an absolute nutter, you know." But Ron's smile said he didn't think it was a bad idea at all.
Snape/Draco: "You've got everything now" (challenge by
cursive)
"Very nice," said Snape, making a show of studying the Malfoy Manor entryway with his hand under his chin. "Of course, the front door will have to go. That crest. I might paint the whole door magenta, actually."
Lucius wheezed. Poor Lucius. Azkaban really had been hell on the man's lungs, hadn't it?
"You...!" Narcissa was ready to say more, but her husband's hand gripped her arm. "Not. Another. Word," Lucius snarled.
Draco, however, had words. "I always knew you were a bastard, Snape, but this tops everything. The ministry said we could stay if you agreed! You didn't have to throw us out!"
Snape smiled. "'Us'? Dear boy, you are not going. In fact, I insisted you stay."
"...You did?"
"Of course. The ministry terms guaranteed me a concubine. Lucius, Narcissa, you've overstayed your welcome. Good-bye. Tweezle, please show Draco the outfit he'll be wearing. With the corset."
"DAA-AD!"
Harry/Sirius, "The flavor of morning" (challenge by
Sirius has given Harry all the water in the pail, and his fever still won't break, and the scrap of cloth that was Sirius's shirt doesn't have enough dampness left in it to sponge anything. Not Harry's fevered face, not the wound in Harry's thigh with its now-sweetish smell, not the ugly red streaks starting to spread into his groin and torso.
He bangs on the cell bars for nearly an hour at a time, using the empty pail. Yelling. Pleading.
No one comes.
Five days later, a host of dead Death Eaters in his wake, Dumbledore finds them.
Sirius's presence, draped over the corpse, lips pressed to Harry's forehead, has kept the rats at bay.
Too blinded by tears to be sickened, Dumbledore brings Sirius out of the dungeon cell, and takes him to face the impossible, hateful morning.
Snape/Sirius -- Every force evolves a form. (challenge by
"You cannot possibly sit down."
"Why not?" Sirius shrugged as he did exactly that, plopping himself down onto the floor of the dodecahedron. "Our wands aren't having any effect on the walls of this thing. Might as well get comfortable and wait for rescue."
"You cannot 'get comfortable' in this thing, Black! We've got a pentagonal space one-twelfth of the surface structure to stand upon in here. If you sit I can't--you'll be--"
"Touching you?" Sirius leered.
"Yes! A fucking pox on all Death Eaters who can count beyond three. A triangular pyramid trap would have accomplished the same thing and given us more standing room."
Sirius appeared to consider this. "But standing in a triangular pyramid, our heads would be awfully close together, wouldn't they?"
"You--! That's not what I--!"
Sirius snagged his robe and pulled him sprawling. "Shut up and give us a kiss."
Harry/Ron -- The beauty is that everything changes (challenge by
"Your mum expects to see you under that, one day," said Harry in a quiet moment, looking at the gazebo.
"Yeah, well. 'Spect she thought I'd be under it before Ginny." Digging his hands deep into the pockets of his formal attendant's robes, Ron turned to look at his sister. He'd never seen a girl look more beautiful, in those white bridal robes of hers. From the way her groom's besotted smile never wavered, neither had Neville, apparently.
"Maybe--" Harry wasn't speaking loudly, but none of the guests were near--"Maybe another night we come out here. Just by ourselves. Your mum doesn't need to know."
Ron snorted. "For what? A private ceremony, or just a good al fresco shag?"
"Bit of both, maybe."
"You're an absolute nutter, you know." But Ron's smile said he didn't think it was a bad idea at all.
Snape/Draco: "You've got everything now" (challenge by
"Very nice," said Snape, making a show of studying the Malfoy Manor entryway with his hand under his chin. "Of course, the front door will have to go. That crest. I might paint the whole door magenta, actually."
Lucius wheezed. Poor Lucius. Azkaban really had been hell on the man's lungs, hadn't it?
"You...!" Narcissa was ready to say more, but her husband's hand gripped her arm. "Not. Another. Word," Lucius snarled.
Draco, however, had words. "I always knew you were a bastard, Snape, but this tops everything. The ministry said we could stay if you agreed! You didn't have to throw us out!"
Snape smiled. "'Us'? Dear boy, you are not going. In fact, I insisted you stay."
"...You did?"
"Of course. The ministry terms guaranteed me a concubine. Lucius, Narcissa, you've overstayed your welcome. Good-bye. Tweezle, please show Draco the outfit he'll be wearing. With the corset."
"DAA-AD!"
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Date: 2004-05-21 08:31 pm (UTC)Goodness, I completely missed the first drabble...
Date: 2004-05-21 09:14 pm (UTC)Re: Goodness, I completely missed the first drabble...
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Date: 2004-05-21 08:48 pm (UTC)The humour was wonderful- mm, corsetry- and I adored the geometry geek! love. Lovely dialogue.
*adores*
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Date: 2004-05-22 04:56 am (UTC)Thank you thank you!
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Date: 2004-05-21 09:08 pm (UTC)Giggled at the last one.
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Date: 2004-05-21 09:55 pm (UTC)I love it. I absolutely love it.
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Date: 2004-05-21 11:15 pm (UTC)Harry/Sirius: Your description of the stench from Harry's wound... urrr. Perfect. And the "impossible, hateful morning"... equally perfect. You do death and mourning well. I mean that as a compliment.
Snape/Draco: Lucius wheezed. The last gasp of a great house. Oh, the ignominy! Oh, the hilarity!
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Date: 2004-05-22 05:09 am (UTC)*wibbles happily over the idea that you think I can do death stuff justice! And, of course, humor, since everyone says comedy is harder, but I'm still an angst slut. Smooch!*
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Date: 2004-05-22 01:13 am (UTC)And the Harry/Sirius- way to to break the heart, there. Argh!
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Date: 2004-05-22 05:38 am (UTC)Snape/Sirius: *snerk* Go Sirius!
Ron/Harry: Awwwww. *loves*
Snape/Draco: *cackles*
Excellent as always!
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Date: 2004-05-22 06:34 am (UTC)The Ron/Harry, though, was adorable. Aw!
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Date: 2004-05-22 07:32 am (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2004-05-22 09:31 am (UTC)But so brilliant. But so heartbreaking.
Waaaah
(Don't ask me which drabble I'm talking about. I'm sorry, but I've been in Sirry-Only mood for a good while...:/)
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Date: 2004-05-22 10:56 am (UTC)That, and "DAAA-AD!"
I smooble you!
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Date: 2004-05-22 11:03 am (UTC)That's hot in a way I never thought possible.
My E-mail: Cobaltshy@tds.net
*thank you*
New Stuff!
Date: 2004-05-22 05:43 pm (UTC)2. I liked it, although -- or perhaps because -- it sounds like a newly-discovered sketch from The Kids In The Hall. (Multimedia commentary tonight, I guess.)
3. Forgive me. I just can't take H/R seriously. For what it is, it's very well done -- the descriptions of Ginny and Neville are brief, evocative, and cute. But I couldn't help it -- when Harry says, "Your mum expects to see you under that, one day," I thought, "Ron's mom wants Ron buried under the gazebo!?"
4. This, on the other hand, is the first page of a twelve-issue mini-series in Prestige Format on acid-free paper. I can see exactly how big Draco's eyes get when he bellows, "DAA-AD!" Excellent.
Wonderful, sweetie!
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Sobriquet :)
Re: New Stuff!
Date: 2004-05-23 03:11 pm (UTC)2. Now I'm trying to cast the sketch of this one and failing. My widdle brain.
3. *dies* Just...dead. DEAD, okay? (Gazebos are not for burying! Gazebos are for MARRYING! You silly creature.)
4. Oh, grief. Big-eyed anime!Draco! In a corset! And a collar, of course. Can't have all that without the collar, y'know!
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Date: 2004-05-23 10:06 am (UTC)Snape/Sirius: Hee! Oh dear, maths.
Harry/Ron: Still giggling at the "al fresco" shag...
Snape/Draco: "DAA-AD!" Dear whiny, petulant Draco. Corseted, even!
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Date: 2004-05-23 03:17 pm (UTC)Oh dear, maths.
Sputter! Oh, man, that's SO quotable, isn't it?
You make me giggle so. Thakn you so much!
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Date: 2004-05-23 11:41 am (UTC)Bwahaha! And who said that Sirius never was one for using his brain?
My absolute favorite would be Snape's "That crest. I might paint the whole door magenta, actually." I knew he was vindicative, but magenta?!
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