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Annnnnnd the drabble in question for [livejournal.com profile] gossymer is here.

Hide In Plain Sight, ~250 words, James/Scorpius, PG-13 for suggestiveness.

*****

"Do you like your classes, Scorpius?" asked Mrs. Potter.

Mr. Potter, at the other end of the table, chuckled. "No one Scorpius's age ever likes being asked that question. Do they, Scorpius?"

Scorpius made an effort not to roll his eyes. Albus's father was trying to be chummy. "I suppose I like Defense Against the Dark Arts well enough."

A snort from James. "He would," James said, not quite low enough to be a mutter.

Mr. Potter gave James a warning look. "None of that."

James didn't suppress his eye-roll. He tucked back into his pudding.

"Scorpius is really good," Albus said around a mouthful of lemon sponge. "We always try to be paired together and I always learn things."

"How to get blood stains out of one's uniform, I'll bet."

"James!" That was Mrs. Potter this time. "You can be excused if you can't be civil."

"No, let James stay," Scorpius said, mild as milk. "He can hardly be faulted for defending a little brother against an opponent with natural skills."

"Unnatural's a better word."

"Perhaps." Scorpius licked the back of his spoon as he looked at James. "I've heard some people refer to my skills that way."

It was worth it to see James's face freeze that way. And no one else, of course, had the faintest inkling what was making their dear oldest son's breath catch like that.

Scorpius suspected James'd make him pay for it later, after everyone else had gone to sleep, but he always looked forward to those punishments, actually.

Date: 2007-09-13 01:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] meredyth-13.livejournal.com
Oooooh! Delicious! It's so 'everyday', and then... that one tiny moment when the whole conversation acquires colour and tone and more meaning than most of the participants would ask for. You open wicked doors - you are my evol doorman of the apocalypse. :D

Date: 2007-09-13 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
I MUST HAVE AN ICON THAT READS THAT! :D Maybe even a t-shirt!

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Date: 2007-09-13 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
Without even reading that comment above, "delicious" was the word that immediately sprang to mind for me too. I somehow managed to forget the pairing two seconds after I read it (*fails*), so that little twist in tone at the end was a delightful little shock. Well-executed drabble!

Date: 2007-09-13 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Oh, goody! I love it when that happens. Ya made my day, thank you so much! :D

Date: 2007-09-13 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] josanpq.livejournal.com
Snicker. Punishment, eh? Poor James. I feel that Scorpius will be a demanding sub.

Date: 2007-09-13 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Even more so, I suspect, than my Dracos are in my fics, hee!

Date: 2007-09-13 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sirryluv.livejournal.com
Ooh, I love that! I could actually feel Jame's "Oh, shit" moment. Lovely, lovely tension. Very enjoyable drabble.

And the "chummy" bit made me LOL. :)

Date: 2007-09-13 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOUR ICON!!! I have been looking for a copy--just a damn jpg, any digital file!--of that picture since I saw a glimpse of it on the HBO Vagina Monologues film! What is the name of that, do you have a larger version????!!!!

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Date: 2007-09-13 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] literati.livejournal.com
There really needs to be more of this pairing. Very tasty.

Date: 2007-09-13 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
I'm convinced there should be, now! [livejournal.com profile] gossymer has converted me! :D

Date: 2007-09-13 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mahaliem.livejournal.com
And no one else, of course, had the faintest inkling what was making their dear oldest son's breath catch like that.

This is delightful.

Date: 2007-09-13 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Hee, glad you liked! :D

Date: 2007-09-13 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gracilejenn.livejournal.com
Ah, I love this!! Once again you initiate me...this is my first Scorpius!

Date: 2007-09-13 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Oh, yay! It's my first non-gen of him, too. :D

Date: 2007-09-13 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imkalena.livejournal.com
Your Scorpius/James has turned my head! Perhaps I must investigate this more thoroughly. ;)

Date: 2007-09-13 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Do! [livejournal.com profile] gossymer is a clever little enabler, I say. ^_^

Date: 2007-09-13 02:38 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] gossymer.livejournal.com
I've already said everything I needed so *points to icon*

Date: 2007-09-13 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Awww! You need some glompin' yerself. ^_^ *glomps*

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Date: 2007-09-13 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bethbethbeth.livejournal.com
My First James/Scorpius! Yay!

Very cool, my dear.

Date: 2007-09-13 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Mine too! And it didn't hurt at all! :D

Date: 2007-09-13 04:26 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] capri-chan.livejournal.com
XD Oh, I do love that.

Date: 2007-09-13 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Aw, yer a sweetie. :D

Date: 2007-09-13 08:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-arrogance.livejournal.com
Yay! I love the suggestiveness *licks scorpius* and, like [livejournal.com profile] secretsolitaire I didn't realized the pairing until the very end *g* It's absolutely awesome!

Date: 2007-09-13 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Heeee! I so love having things sneak up on readers like that. Even when I list the pairing! (I mean, don't accuse me of being ultra-devious or anythin'! :D )

Date: 2007-09-13 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foudebassan.livejournal.com
*huge grin*

Date: 2007-09-13 05:37 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-09-13 10:52 am (UTC)
ext_6368: cherry blossoms on a tree -- with my fandom name "EntreNous" on it (vintage: maybe I want to look cheap)
From: [identity profile] entrenous88.livejournal.com
I've been looking for James/Scorpius! This was tantalizing and fun. I like imagining Scorpius playing with his friendship with Albus to incur James's interest/ire.

Date: 2007-09-13 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
There's so much there for a wicked little Scorpius to use, isn't there? Thank you! ^_^

Date: 2007-09-13 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orpheus-samhain.livejournal.com
Ahahaha! Yes, he would! :D

Date: 2007-09-13 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
It's Scorpius, so, I'm sure of it! :D

Date: 2007-09-13 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angiepen.livejournal.com
Heh, perfect last line. :D It turns the whole thing inside out.

Angie

Date: 2007-09-13 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
I loved the idea of the two of them hiding their lust in the guise of rivalry, hee!

Date: 2007-09-13 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aiji-yuywell.livejournal.com
Awwww, my first next gen fic. It was witty, delightfully natural, and blew me away! Thank you!

Date: 2007-09-13 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
(That icon always kills me. I keep seeing Simm dressed up in that dress and bow.) Next gen fic is the new wave, baby! Might as well not fight it, I tell myself. ^_^

Date: 2007-09-13 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com
oh! *clap clap*
Love it!

Date: 2007-09-13 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
So happy you liked! :D

Date: 2007-09-14 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pushdragon.livejournal.com
Oh *very* nice! I love how light and simple and playful you kept this. And watching James completely out manoeuvred by the younger Scorpius ... beautiful!

Date: 2007-09-14 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Hee! Yeah, even if their supposed hostility is planned, Scorpius still likes to get a few underhanded shots in.

Date: 2007-09-15 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tsuj.livejournal.com
"No, let James stay," Scorpius said, mild as milk.
----
What a perfect line. I'll never drink milk the same again.

Date: 2007-09-22 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
It just seemed to be the right simile to put there!:D (Ha! Your icon's great!)

Date: 2007-09-21 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cellia.livejournal.com
Awesome. Awesome.

Date: 2007-09-22 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Aw, you sweetie! &hearts

Date: 2007-10-07 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com
Wah! I want mooore!

Date: 2007-10-11 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Does anyone else have a problem with the name-recycling thing?!?

I really enjoyed this, but I had to read it over about three times in order to get over the knee-jerk reaction my mind has about James (Harry's father automatically springs to mind, damn it).

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Date: 2007-11-08 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hotfortwins.livejournal.com
Guh.... Merph.... Bunnies are attacking!

Date: 2007-11-13 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com
Oh, goody! :D

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