A review of Deathly Hallows that (more articulately) mirrors my thoughts.

[amanuensis1]

(Uncut as per my "not cutting for spoilers any longer" warning, but not that spoilery.)

From The Atlantic's review of DH by Ross Douthat:


(Rowling's) genius is for crossing genres, mixing the sword-and-sorcery tale with the boarding-school novel, and merging both with the intricate plotting of an Agatha Christie story. And this is the first problem with her saga’s grand finale – it’s more of a straightforward high-fantasy novel than any of its predecessors, and Rowling isn’t quite up to the task. She needs the Stover at Yale structure, it turns out, and the Ten Little Indians plot mechanisms; without the “something fishy at Hogwarts” framework, her story sprawls and meanders through a baggy quest narrative. The more time Harry and Ron and Hermione spend hopscotching around England, the more the reader misses the familiar rhythms of a school year at the wizarding academy...


I'm more enthusiastic about Rowling's work than this reviewer is overall (he's liked the series but feels the last book compromises the series' ability to hold together as a classic-to-be), but he describes a lot of my dissatisfactions with DH.

But! I am on my second go-through of it, via audiobook, and I'll see how it feels to me this time through.

Comments

[fuschia.livejournal.com]

I agree that there is a sort of free-fall feeling that enters both the text and Harry's perception of the world once he is removed from the rhythms and mundanities of Hogwarts. Although I initially missed Hogwarts immensely, I'm starting to come around to feeling that this removal of routine was a necessary shock, that Harry needed to be left without a map or a syllabus. I loved the moment when he wished he was back in Hogwarts like Neville, where his role would be clear, where he could be the student rebelling against the unfair regime. It's easier to be a rebel than to be in charge)

(Of course, he also wished he could be back at Hogwarts getting detentions from Snape...hopefully detentions similar to the ones about which you have written. *g*)