LJ Drabble Night, Mar 26, 2004 (kinda sorta)

[amanuensis1]

Had multiple demands on attention and only got to sit down for one, and THEN, I couldn't keep in the word count because I realized that what I was writing wasn't a drabble, it was the start of a story. Bah. So. Here's my 169-word...what do I call this?...teaser for a fic that will probably never get written. Because non-con/dubious consent femmeslash is kinda the domain of my original efforts.



Lily/Narcissa, Waltz of the flowers (challenge by cluegirl)

The taste of the older girl is salt and sharpness, nothing like flowers or honey or anything stupidly girly like that. It's addictive, and it's what keeps Lily coming back, every time.

Lily pushes a piece of her own hair out of her mouth and shifts on her elbow to continue. But Narcissa's thigh nudges her cheek in a way that suggests she wants her attention. "No. It's no good." She gives Lily's shoulder a push with her hand. "I want you naked."

Lily blinks. "I...we don't..."

"That's right. We don't. You lift my skirt and push aside the crotch of my knickers and go to it, don't you? And then everything drops back into place and you can get up and leave, can't you? Not this time, dearheart." She sits forward. "Stand and strip. Let me look at you."

If Lily refuses, she won't be allowed to stay. Or come back. Narcissa's like that.

She stands. Wonders if they remembered to lock the door.

Decides she doesn't care.

Comments

[sodomite.livejournal.com]

WHOA. Give me more. I normally don't like femmeslash but this is promising. Please finish it! *begs*

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Heh! Lily and Narcissa seem so unfleshed-out in my brain that part of me thinks it would be wrong to make this fanfic, when this is the sort of original erotica that I go ahead and write anyway, without needing a fanfic universe for it. 'M not saying that I won't, but, y'see where I'm going, and have been, with that. But THANK you, VERY earnestly!

[loony-moony.livejournal.com]

Oy! Not that you writing Potterverse femmeslash (at last! :DDD) doesn't take my breath away, but what about...you know...not having Snape tied to your bed if you don't finish the thingy?

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

No Snape???!!! Oh, woman, you're evil. Damn.

[loony-moony.livejournal.com]

FINISH THE THINGY YOU LAZY BUM!

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*snortcacklegiggle!*

[loony-moony.livejournal.com]

THAT'S IT! NO SNAPE FOR A MONTH! YOU'VE BEEN A VERY NAUGHTY WOMAN! *snickers ebilly*

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Whimper! What if...what if I polish up some older, original femmeslashy stuff and let you see it? Will I be forgiven? Or is that no appeasement?

[loony-moony.livejournal.com]

Ooooh...tempting. Will it be worth to see it than Said Thingy? Hmmm? Thnk that I already know with what the thingy deals. >:)

[loony-moony.livejournal.com]

Ooooh...tempting. Will it be worth to see it than Said Thingy? Hmmm? Thnk that I already know with what the thingy deals. >:)

[anjenue.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is lovely. Just getting into femslash myself, but this one's definitely a promising find. :> Of course, you wrote it, so I shouldn't be surprised.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetie! You're too nice to me.

[maelwaedd.livejournal.com]

Oh, you're just beautiful.
::fangirls::

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Eep! Oh, I'm so happy you liked!

Oh yeah....

[(Anonymous)]

Now that's a woman who could successfully marry a Malfoy. And what if Lily has to choose...?

More. More. More.

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Sobriquet :)

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[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Um--choose what?

Re: Oh yeah....

[(Anonymous)]

Between James and Narcissa, silly. Love versus addiction... and suddenly we're off into a femslashy AU....

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Sobriquet :)

Re: Oh yeah....

[fitzcamel.livejournal.com]

This is really random, but: Sobriquet -- are you the Sobriquet who wrote "Drinks for the House"? Cuz I really liked that; have you written any other HP fic that I somehow didn't hear about?

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[(Anonymous)]

Yes, indeed, that was me. Thanks so much -- I'm glad you liked it! And, no, I really haven't written much else in the Potterverse -- a drabble here and there (and I mean "here and there", as in, like, three) and nosing into McTabby's "Summary Executions", which are like an online MST3K party!

[kittygirl35226.livejournal.com]

femslash! *resists the urge to snog you* you will forever have my adoration if you'd write more

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Heh! Haven't quite found the niche for it in this fandom's fanfic, but, we'll see... Thank you! *snogs you anyway*