Date: 2003-12-27 03:20 pm (UTC)
All very lovely, as I've come to expect (you had me thinking of Snape/Lucius as sweet, which is a seriously weird mental place for me). However, I principally wanted to comment on the sonnet. I love it when people use this form correctly, and just that you'd managed to do that, and stuck to the word count, in fifteen minutes, would have had me very impressed. But that last line - that really knocked me off-balance. Subtley sexy and quite, quite beautiful. Thank you :)
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