The drabbles were all great; I especially liked the Lucius/Severus one and how you incorporated the idea of the lines from Dickinson's poem - the ending gave me a fuzzyish feeling, but not at all a warm fuzzy feeling... if that makes any sense at all ;) And I admire the sonnet ever so: the content (heehee) and the well use of words - not to mention the well-written rhymes (I remember attempting to write a sonnet, trying to make the right amount of syllables and making rhymes; it didn't turn out too well -.-).
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Date: 2003-12-26 09:10 pm (UTC)