Your vocabulary and use of language is very curious--very enjoyable to read, in its unique way. I like how you gave mindslave!Barton some character and how Loki was infuriated that he could not dominate it despite his control. I also like how intelligent you made Barton--we sometimes forget his own skill sets simply because there are others like Iron Man or Bruce but damn, Barton knows how to run the show. Nice work! (I finished my Natasha/Barton fic, btw!)
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Date: 2012-06-15 12:53 am (UTC)Your vocabulary and use of language is very curious--very enjoyable to read, in its unique way. I like how you gave mindslave!Barton some character and how Loki was infuriated that he could not dominate it despite his control. I also like how intelligent you made Barton--we sometimes forget his own skill sets simply because there are others like Iron Man or Bruce but damn, Barton knows how to run the show. Nice work!
(I finished my Natasha/Barton fic, btw!)