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amanuensis1 ([personal profile] amanuensis1) wrote2007-09-12 09:18 pm
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DRABBLE: Hide In Plain Sight (James/Scorpius, PG-13,~250 words)

Annnnnnd the drabble in question for [livejournal.com profile] gossymer is here.

Hide In Plain Sight, ~250 words, James/Scorpius, PG-13 for suggestiveness.

*****

"Do you like your classes, Scorpius?" asked Mrs. Potter.

Mr. Potter, at the other end of the table, chuckled. "No one Scorpius's age ever likes being asked that question. Do they, Scorpius?"

Scorpius made an effort not to roll his eyes. Albus's father was trying to be chummy. "I suppose I like Defense Against the Dark Arts well enough."

A snort from James. "He would," James said, not quite low enough to be a mutter.

Mr. Potter gave James a warning look. "None of that."

James didn't suppress his eye-roll. He tucked back into his pudding.

"Scorpius is really good," Albus said around a mouthful of lemon sponge. "We always try to be paired together and I always learn things."

"How to get blood stains out of one's uniform, I'll bet."

"James!" That was Mrs. Potter this time. "You can be excused if you can't be civil."

"No, let James stay," Scorpius said, mild as milk. "He can hardly be faulted for defending a little brother against an opponent with natural skills."

"Unnatural's a better word."

"Perhaps." Scorpius licked the back of his spoon as he looked at James. "I've heard some people refer to my skills that way."

It was worth it to see James's face freeze that way. And no one else, of course, had the faintest inkling what was making their dear oldest son's breath catch like that.

Scorpius suspected James'd make him pay for it later, after everyone else had gone to sleep, but he always looked forward to those punishments, actually.
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[identity profile] meredyth-13.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
Oooooh! Delicious! It's so 'everyday', and then... that one tiny moment when the whole conversation acquires colour and tone and more meaning than most of the participants would ask for. You open wicked doors - you are my evol doorman of the apocalypse. :D

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
I MUST HAVE AN ICON THAT READS THAT! :D Maybe even a t-shirt!

[identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:41 am (UTC)(link)
Without even reading that comment above, "delicious" was the word that immediately sprang to mind for me too. I somehow managed to forget the pairing two seconds after I read it (*fails*), so that little twist in tone at the end was a delightful little shock. Well-executed drabble!

[identity profile] josanpq.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
Snicker. Punishment, eh? Poor James. I feel that Scorpius will be a demanding sub.

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, goody! I love it when that happens. Ya made my day, thank you so much! :D

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
Even more so, I suspect, than my Dracos are in my fics, hee!

[identity profile] sirryluv.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I love that! I could actually feel Jame's "Oh, shit" moment. Lovely, lovely tension. Very enjoyable drabble.

And the "chummy" bit made me LOL. :)

[identity profile] literati.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
There really needs to be more of this pairing. Very tasty.

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOUR ICON!!! I have been looking for a copy--just a damn jpg, any digital file!--of that picture since I saw a glimpse of it on the HBO Vagina Monologues film! What is the name of that, do you have a larger version????!!!!

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
I'm convinced there should be, now! [livejournal.com profile] gossymer has converted me! :D

[identity profile] mahaliem.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
And no one else, of course, had the faintest inkling what was making their dear oldest son's breath catch like that.

This is delightful.

[identity profile] gracilejenn.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 02:10 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, I love this!! Once again you initiate me...this is my first Scorpius!

[identity profile] imkalena.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
Your Scorpius/James has turned my head! Perhaps I must investigate this more thoroughly. ;)
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[identity profile] gossymer.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
I've already said everything I needed so *points to icon*

[identity profile] bethbethbeth.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
My First James/Scorpius! Yay!

Very cool, my dear.
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[identity profile] capri-chan.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
XD Oh, I do love that.

[identity profile] lady-arrogance.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 08:05 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! I love the suggestiveness *licks scorpius* and, like [livejournal.com profile] secretsolitaire I didn't realized the pairing until the very end *g* It's absolutely awesome!

[identity profile] foudebassan.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
*huge grin*
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[identity profile] entrenous88.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 10:52 am (UTC)(link)
I've been looking for James/Scorpius! This was tantalizing and fun. I like imagining Scorpius playing with his friendship with Albus to incur James's interest/ire.

[identity profile] orpheus-samhain.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha! Yes, he would! :D

[identity profile] angiepen.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, perfect last line. :D It turns the whole thing inside out.

Angie

[identity profile] aiji-yuywell.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 01:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww, my first next gen fic. It was witty, delightfully natural, and blew me away! Thank you!

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, glad you liked! :D

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
oh! *clap clap*
Love it!

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