Oh, if I knew you had recommended it, I would've read the story much, much earlier. And it's fabulous! I avoided it, at first, because I doubted a random threesome like that could work.
But it did.
Oh, it certainly did.
My only problem: it was all too short. Not just the story in general, but a lot of the scenes. I'd love to see a reworked version with a tad more detail. I'll have to comment about that on the story itself, though.
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Date: 2006-08-03 10:22 pm (UTC)But it did.
Oh, it certainly did.
My only problem: it was all too short. Not just the story in general, but a lot of the scenes. I'd love to see a reworked version with a tad more detail. I'll have to comment about that on the story itself, though.