This was just lovely! What I liked best was the atmosphere of the house. I could really feel its presence all around me. You're such a master at creating atmosphere! Something else I always love is how you blend characterization and sex. The reader can tell so much about the characters just by watching them having sex. I also loved the quiet feeling about this fic; Harry and Draco seemed somewhat distant with each other and yet there was this silent communication. Mmm...yes, lovely. :)
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Date: 2005-09-06 11:17 am (UTC)