LJ Drabble Night, Dec 26, 2003

[amanuensis1]

Another Poetry night theme. (Though it also looks like Snape night, too!) This time, I have for you four drabbles...and a sonnet. Kinda doggerel-y for a sonnet, but it was written in 15 minutes and fit the word count, so, I'm satisfied.




"If I can stop one heart from breaking, /I shall not live in vain." Dickinson, Snape/Lupin (challenge by sharp_tongue)

"I've come to say thank you."

"Have you."

"Look, don't be a prat about this, Snape. This is so large I hardly know where to begin, and if you keep this up--this attitude that bringing Sirius back was no more effort for you than is stirring sugar into your tea--"

"I don't take sugar."

"You insufferable--" Lupin gets himself under control. "This is exactly why Sirius hasn't come yet. He has no idea what to say to you. How can he possibly thank you for this? Dammit, how can I thank you?"

Snape knows. He knows what he would have from Lupin.

What he will settle for, however, would be for Lupin to stop telling him over and over again, how much it means to him. Even if that's precisely why Snape did it.

He will not confess the reason.

He doesn't want Lupin's pity.

Not that.

---

Faster and faster / They vanish into darkness / our years together. (Wendy Cope) Snape/Dumbledore (challenge by isiscolo)

Harry sits on the edge of his bed in 12 Grimmauld Place and thinks about what he's just seen.

They couldn't have known he was there.

It wasn't even lascivious. It was only the touch of two hands. And the look in two pairs of eyes.

Harry is only sixteen, but he doesn't need experience to tell him that the way Dumbledore bid Snape goodnight means anything but one thing.

He tries to imagine it. Dumbledore--old Dumbledore--and Snape.
It should be ludicrous.

But he remembers the look again. Thinks about the Order. And Voldemort. And Sirius.

And how very uncertain the future looks to everyone. Including Dumbledore, and Snape.

Including him.

A sound at the door. "Harry? Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't--"

"N--!" It's coming out too loud. He tries again. "No."

Reaches out a hand. "No, please, Hermione, come in. Will you sit with me?"

---

"I kept him for his humor's sake,/For he would oft beguile" WIlliam Cowper Voldemort/Snape (challenge by venivincere)

In sleep, this is what he sees:

The hair, which is called limp in its usual vertical orientation, turning to a splay of tendrils that evoke Medusa's serpents. The mouth, held in a pursed sneer of disapproval during the day, relaxing into the humblest of lines, lips separating with a hint of moisture at their corners. Snape's eyelids no longer standing like sentries, but fallen quiet, off-duty for the duration of the night. And the fingers, usually clasped or steepled so deliberately, instead lying open, reaching, every so often, for a corner of the pillow or the edge of the sheet. Or even his lover's shoulder.

Voldemort has many nights where he sleeps little, himself. But he has no lack of entertainment, during that time.

---

"Because I could not stop for Death,/ He kindly stopped for me;/ The carriage held but just ourselves/ And Immortality." Dickinson. Lucius/Snape (challenge by sharp_tongue)

"Severus?"

No longer cold.

"Severus, get up."

His side didn't hurt anymore. Had someone cast a healing charm?

A hand clasped his, tugged. Snape turned his head to see Lucius Malfoy standing above him, forcing him to rise to his feet, whether he would or no.

When he was standing, Snape began to laugh.

Lucius's mouth twitched. "You find this funny?"

"Yes, and why not? Tell me, something, Lucius: did it hurt?"

"The killing curse? I doubt it was worse than a sword through the ribs."

"We'll never know, will we?" Snape was still laughing. "Can't go through each, and compare."

"No, but who knows what knowledge lies ahead for us? Are you...glad that I waited?"

He stopped laughing. "Yes."

Hands still clasped, the two walked away from the battlefield.

---

"Without warning/ as a whirlwind/ swoops on an oak/ Love shakes my heart." Sappho. Harry/Snape. (challenge by sharp_tongue)

I said, "Detention, Potter," and the brat
Remained within his seat, and did not scowl
But waited 'til the class had gone, and sat
With eyes as wide as some strange green-eyed owl.
I knew he planned more mischief. Had I known
The sort within his mind, I would have fled.
But I believed myself too wise, too stone,
My heart changed years ago to mere base lead.
So when I stalked my way across the room
And stood before him, daring him to speak,
He only smiled, not fearing any doom,
And stood, and did a thing to turn me weak:
He placed a wicked kiss upon my lips.
My heart's not lead--it must be flesh: it skips.

Comments

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*wibbles* Oh, my, no, thank YOU! That's...oh, jeez, thank you so much for that!

(and now I need to make icons on the theme of "I have no saving throw against..." because that's a terrific phrase!)

[ptyx.livejournal.com]

Oh, no, you're a genius!

Hey, that icon was made by morgan_d especially for me! I'm a very magnanimous person, so I'll let you use it, if morgan_d agrees.

;-)

[ptyx.livejournal.com]

On second thought, you better ask her permission.

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

Great drabbles! I especially liked #1 and #3. *sigh*

[writteninsable.livejournal.com]

*smiles*

I really like the sense of bitterness/sadness the first one made me feel and the last one made me laugh. The het was watched for and kinda...interesting, in a way, but I don't even mildly ship H/Hr, so...yeah. *laughs*

And I did like the LM/SS one, as well. The idea of Lucius waiting was...romantic and sweet...but the way he prodded Sev up was totally in character.

~Cai

[soawen.livejournal.com]

Love your icon.

[soawen.livejournal.com]

Snape/Lupin: So very, very sad. It makes me want to whack Remus on the head until he sees the obvious (and writing Snape guilt-tripping Remus into sex and committing suicide because he sullied his love, and then he haunts Remus and Remus falls in love with the sad ghost because you can never have too much angst, but that's another thing for another day).

Snape/Dumbledore: I like this one the best. The distance - Harry's POV in stead of either Snape's or Dumbledore's - works well, and the overall insecurity and fear of the future stands out very clearly.

Snape/Voldemort: Aww, sleeping lovers ... The lines in the challenge makes it slightly, I don't know, sinister?

Snape/Lucius: This one made me laugh. It was so typically the two of them. Now that I'm thinking about it, I read it as if they killed each other and still their relationship remains the same.

Snape/Harry: I'm deeply impressed by you remembering the formula for a sonnet. The last line made quite the impression as I don't connect anything Snape-related with 'skipping' ;)

[writteninsable.livejournal.com]

*smiles* Thanks.

arabella_o made it.

~Cai

[lilka.livejournal.com]

All very lovely, as I've come to expect (you had me thinking of Snape/Lucius as sweet, which is a seriously weird mental place for me). However, I principally wanted to comment on the sonnet. I love it when people use this form correctly, and just that you'd managed to do that, and stuck to the word count, in fifteen minutes, would have had me very impressed. But that last line - that really knocked me off-balance. Subtley sexy and quite, quite beautiful. Thank you :)

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Am doing so as we speak!

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I was fond of #3...fluffy Voldemort, hee!

[http://users.livejournal.com/_hannelore/]

It's the last that's the most memorable. Wow.

"What he will settle for, however, would be for Lupin to stop telling him over and over again, how much it means to him. Even if that's precisely why Snape did it."

*Lovely.*

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

I can't help but have a good time pairing up Lucius and Severus in an ultimately romantic way. It's like they're the only ones who can match each other.

[writteninsable.livejournal.com]

*laughs*

This is true.

They work well together. I like the way you write them.

~Cai

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

New motto: You can never have too much angst. Hee! I'm with you on that. As long as there's a happy ending! (don't tell me that's a contradiction!)

Oh, and I'm so glad you liked the Snapledore! That was fun, weaving around that one...and oh, thank you for all the comments! *hugs*

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*wibbles incoherently* Eep! Thank you so very, very much. That--wow. That means a lot. wibble.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

I had a good time with the sonnet. Thank you extremely. ^_^

[ptyx.livejournal.com]

Hmpf. I never thought I would be jealous of an icon... Look, this icon was made for me by my best friend; I've been using it since the "marriage protection week". I'm a nobody in this fandom, and this icon even earned me some friends! My friends know me by this icon. It's like your Lucius icon... Maybe you wouldn't be jealous if somebody began to use your icon, but you're a BNF, and I'm not. I know I'm being silly. Of course you can use it if morgan_d gives you permission, and I won't get mad at you, but... could you please not use it?

BTW, it's a fluffy icon, it doesn't fit your style!

I'm sorry. I'm so ashamed.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

Oh! That is all you had to say. It is not silly at all. Especially if it's a "I'm known by this icon"! I shall not use it anymore! *deletes from user pictures* All gone! I shall keep it in my personal files for my viewing pleasure and that is all. ^_^

[exbentley]

Yes, there should have been a *too in there. *shameface*

[ptyx.livejournal.com]

Thank you, darling. {{{{{amanuensis}}}}}

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*hugs*

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

*hugs back!*

[plausive.livejournal.com]

They're all so good! I really loved your sonnet, and the Lucius/Snape one would make a great fic.

[amanuensis1.livejournal.com]

So much Lucius/Snape is full of betrayal and sadness. You tempt me to write it the way I like to read it! ^_^ (But I'd miss Harryfic. Sigh...)