Oohhhh that is so incredibly creepy. I love it, I love figuring out each object myself and then seeing how Lucius has changed the memory to suit his whim. It's almost scary who well-crafted this small smidgens of lines fit into a world where the rest of the puzlle pieces just come together in your mind. Like, I don't even need to read any more to fill in the rest of the story Lucius has crafted.
And the progression, that terrible progression from Harry's innocent youth to his fourth and fifth year, where it become apparent that Harry's become sexualized with Lucius.
However, each little 'memory' is sensual in it's own way. The warmth of the wrap, the glass roundness of the Remebrall, it's like well. Lucius is clever, and therefore makes Harry's new memories tangible and real and sensory. It's beautifully done.
It's strange, but the one that creeps me out the most is the Maraurder's Map. It made me feel so sad to read that renewed memory, I had to read the line a few times over just to absorb it. Wahhh.
Such a well-contained, thorough-yet-provocative ficlet. You are, as always, brilliant. glockgal/amanuensis1 4EVA!!!
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Date: 2003-12-13 10:12 am (UTC)And the progression, that terrible progression from Harry's innocent youth to his fourth and fifth year, where it become apparent that Harry's become sexualized with Lucius.
However, each little 'memory' is sensual in it's own way. The warmth of the wrap, the glass roundness of the Remebrall, it's like well. Lucius is clever, and therefore makes Harry's new memories tangible and real and sensory. It's beautifully done.
It's strange, but the one that creeps me out the most is the Maraurder's Map. It made me feel so sad to read that renewed memory, I had to read the line a few times over just to absorb it. Wahhh.
Such a well-contained, thorough-yet-provocative ficlet. You are, as always, brilliant.