So much better than what I expected from the headers! No, wait, this sounds wrong. I expected something wonderful because, well, it's you - what I mean is that this surpassed even my already high expectations. The two parallel parts of the story, interchanging with each other, and your use of similar sentences for switching between them worked SO WELL. Also, HULK'S VOICE OMG. So fantastic. What a great exploration of Bruce's character, and the relationship between all three of them. Oh, and the lay/lie moment! :D
Not 2013 yet where either of us are but - Happy New Year! ♥
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So much better than what I expected from the headers! No, wait, this sounds wrong. I expected something wonderful because, well, it's you - what I mean is that this surpassed even my already high expectations. The two parallel parts of the story, interchanging with each other, and your use of similar sentences for switching between them worked SO WELL. Also, HULK'S VOICE OMG. So fantastic. What a great exploration of Bruce's character, and the relationship between all three of them. Oh, and the lay/lie moment! :D
Not 2013 yet where either of us are but - Happy New Year! ♥