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amanuensis1 ([personal profile] amanuensis1) wrote2011-09-17 10:44 am
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Meta, distilled.

Meta-revelation:

A couple of weeks ago I picked up Red Glove by Holly Black, and all through the book I was delighted at how little exposition the book throws at the reader. The book treats the reader like an intelligent creature who can infer from context, as it drops hints at events past and assumes the reader has plenty of imagination to invent the conversations these characters might have had, the details of the lives they've lived before they arrived at these stages in their conflicts. It uses unfamiliar jargon and doesn't stop the action to explain it, since context is plenty. It was one of the first books in a long time that hasn't pinged my annoyance button with tedious blocks of exposition, and I was delighted.

Of course, once I finished it, I discovered it was the second book in a series. *facepalm*

Except, as I lifted my face outta my palm, it made me realize: this is how I like my fiction. How I like to read it and how I like to write it. Where the worldbuilding comes as it comes. Free of dense exposition blocks. Showing the unfamiliar in its context. Assuming the reader can use her brain.

No one style is going to please everyone, but here's my new personal writing maxim: write like it's the second book.
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[identity profile] ivyblossom.livejournal.com 2011-09-18 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
Actually, Holly does this in the first book of the series as well. She doesn't stop to explain things, she just jumps right in. Drops you right into the action in the very first scene. White Cat is one of the very best YA books I've ever read, and I'm kind of hoarding Red Glove for a bad day. So your original revelation still stands.

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2011-09-21 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
I have no problem believing this, as I should be able to expect the style would carry over even into the first book. Yeah, I'll probably get to White Cat one of these days, thanks for the prompt!