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amanuensis1 ([personal profile] amanuensis1) wrote2011-09-17 10:44 am
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Meta, distilled.

Meta-revelation:

A couple of weeks ago I picked up Red Glove by Holly Black, and all through the book I was delighted at how little exposition the book throws at the reader. The book treats the reader like an intelligent creature who can infer from context, as it drops hints at events past and assumes the reader has plenty of imagination to invent the conversations these characters might have had, the details of the lives they've lived before they arrived at these stages in their conflicts. It uses unfamiliar jargon and doesn't stop the action to explain it, since context is plenty. It was one of the first books in a long time that hasn't pinged my annoyance button with tedious blocks of exposition, and I was delighted.

Of course, once I finished it, I discovered it was the second book in a series. *facepalm*

Except, as I lifted my face outta my palm, it made me realize: this is how I like my fiction. How I like to read it and how I like to write it. Where the worldbuilding comes as it comes. Free of dense exposition blocks. Showing the unfamiliar in its context. Assuming the reader can use her brain.

No one style is going to please everyone, but here's my new personal writing maxim: write like it's the second book.

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2011-09-17 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I think that it's fair to say that in any given book, if half the readers go, "Oh!" at The Big Reveal and half go "Wait, WHAT?" but then the "Wait, WHAT?" people go back and read the last page again and at least 35% of them join the "Oh!" people at that point, then in my opinion that's the way I like to read/write. I don't mind if I'm in the "Wait, WHAT?" group on the first go-round (in fact, that tells me that the book passes the "subtlety" test, so I like that) but I do want to get it by the time I go back and read the last page again. If that made any sense at ALL.

I don't have to like the character(s) as long as I can match the headspace of someone, preferably the protagonist. And if it's a first-person POV it needs to be the narrator. (That's a post of meta all by itself!)