Okay, I like the first stanza all on its own. The second one loses me.

Clicking on the song...omigod, INXS. I still pronounce this band's name "inks." And I've never heard a song of theirs I liked. Let's see. Argh, I really don't like the singer's voice, never have, and the way he makes all the lyrics unintelligible. This one runs up against those difficulties preventing me from bonding with it at all. So, it's not a failed experiment, but it's a different outcome in the experiment!

*cannot resist using this icon*