effie-chan.livejournal.com ([identity profile] effie-chan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amanuensis1 2010-03-29 03:08 am (UTC)

Wow, did you come up with that on the spot? That's impressive.

Wouldn't you have to drop one syllable from the second to last line, though? For example the "oh" is not vital.

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