1. Exquisite use of language, with exceptional attention to detail, 2. Somebody is squirming, 3. By at least part of the way through, the reader is squirming, 4. By the end of it the reader wonders if they're going to go to hell, and if it will be as much fun as what they've just read.
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1. Exquisite use of language, with exceptional attention to detail,
2. Somebody is squirming,
3. By at least part of the way through, the reader is squirming,
4. By the end of it the reader wonders if they're going to go to hell, and if it will be as much fun as what they've just read.
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